All 3 of my fantasy books have had a thorough edit overhaul, readying them for the newly released Omnibus edition of the 3 books in 1.
Here's a taster from
Book 1, Chapter 1: Guardian Dragons
"She was his minion. He owned her. She would never be free. Her soul had become trapped within the labyrinth of his dark magic. Long ago, she had given up being afraid of the unknown. She believed that her soul would never pass on to the Realm of the Dead and find peace; it was tainted with evil. If her Master chose, he could reward her with youth and eternal life. This was her hope."